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Heavy In...by ~Fnicole

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Your Arms.."
FEEDBACK or Critique please :3
I was a heavy heart to carry
My feet dragged across ground
And he took me to the river
Where he slowly let me drown

My love has concrete feet
My love's an iron ball
Wrapped around your ankles
Over the waterfall..- Florence & The Machine Heavy in your arms
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just wanted to get my mind off everything and while reading The hunger games last book and listening to this song i got so involved and so distracted it helps a lot im in love with BOTH the hunger games trilogy and Florence
The textures belong to [link] ( idk how to tag someone here so i'll let her now ^^')
COPYRIGHTED C 2012-
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=firstfruits Jun 23, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

Hello! ^^ I have maybe a few suggestions that could help~ I think it would be a little more visually appealing if you added some more contrast to the skintones! As of right now, they're all kind of muddy (in tone, they all are very similar from the shadows to the highlights). One good way to discover this is if you turn the image black and white, then you will see that her entire skin would appear gray and have very little variance in the shadows. So definitely push the shadows and highlights a bit more to add some value, interest, and depth to her skintones! (: Practice with stronger lighting. Also, like I believe someone else said, her nose is a bit small? Check out some images of women's profiles and see how they look. It would be great to practice drawing from them! Those are just a few things that stood out to me right off the bat. Good luck! And never give up! Everyone can really improve just by sticking with it and working hard NONSTOP!

~Fnicole Jun 23, 2012

thank you so much i tried looking for reference but i ended up erasing it all :/ so i kind of give up XD i'll sure try it next time thank you so much

!gambitlover123 Jun 22, 2012

This is much better than anything I could ever do! I stink at this kind of thing and to see someone be good at it makes me wonder how it works.

Really though, this is amazing.

~Fnicole Jun 22, 2012

Thank you so much

!! practice lots of practice im still on it

~GrisselleR Jun 21, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

This a really cool idea and great presentation! I think the eyes is a little too big in relation to the nose. These two structures should be about the same size. The lips are colored fantastically and I suggest you do some hair studies to see how it should fall at that angle and how you should color it. I've never been that great at digital painting myself, but you're off to a great start!

~Fnicole Jun 21, 2012

D thank you !! i was thinking the same thing because i was trying to do some sort of smokey eye but that didn't come out right hehe ^^' thank you so much

D i love you so much i really appreciate it ^^

*SenshiStock Jun 21, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Ahhh looks really cool! I'm not very experienced with digital art but it looks great to me. I love the lips especially. I kind of feel like I should be able to see the other side of her mouth a bit, from this angle, but I'm not sure. I love the way the hair flows all over, but I think maybe it could stand to have a little more form. It's a bit hard to explain, but right now it's like the lines of the hair with some colors under it so I see that instead of piles of physical hair flowing. It's kind of a style thing, so it might be intentional. The face shape is rendered nicely and the eye is also really beautiful.

~Fnicole Jun 21, 2012

thank you very much

and i did the other part of her mouth but it looked kinda off and then i tried drawing her teeth but it seemed wrong tho im just trying new things

thank you so much ^^ i really appreciate it

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